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"What does it take for a button to get pushed"


I did this thinking about the community and the relation to it. And after thinking for a while I think I knew that lots of people in DA struggle for attention their first years or so. So basically I changed the expression "What does a guy have to do to get some attention around here" to "What does it take for a button to get pushed around here". The button thing was just to relate it even more to deviantART and that is because for art to meet application a button or a link a=has to be clicked hehe get my drift? Couldnt put a link there (No ideas for a link character) but I did came up with a simple button character. All vector!


Thanks for all the positive feedback people :D. If you like give it a :+fav:


FINAL VERSION FOR THE CONTEST...no more edits i promise. :giggle:


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:icondonnahagedorn:
donnahagedorn Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
cool work...
please check mine..
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Thanks, Ok!
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:iconliniocht:
liniocht Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorry about the delay getting back to you, heres the feedback!!
This is a good idea for a shirt, i mean I understand how hard it is to try and get attention on DA as I only joined a few months back :iconflowerdanceplz:
the image its self is very good ! its real eye catching and It gets your message across well :) also I like the way the text slopes around the picture,

well done, I think you have a chance of winning :iconfurryglompplz:
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
Thanks bro it was worth the wait. Glad to see I bettered the design. Because a while back I was far from this. And even if I don't win I have learned a lot on T-Shirt design from the feedback I've gotten since entering this contest. Thanks! :D
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:iconliniocht:
liniocht Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey no problem! I'm glad I could help, the finished design looks really good! :iconcuteglompplz:
good luck in the contest! and thanx so much for the watch!:iconfatlaplz:
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
No problem buddy I sent you an invite to my group. Right now it's for promotion purposes on the contest but is going to be a concept group once the whole thing is over.
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:iconliniocht:
liniocht Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sounds cool :iconbummiesplz:
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
:D
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:iconliniocht:
liniocht Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconglompglompplz:
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:icontrublood-addict:
trublood-addict Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
i really love the idea!
would love to see it on a black shirt though
(keeping everything else the same colors)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Well ill see what I can make. As far as this goes I'm adding a few more entries for show purposes because it will be the same character but it will just read attention craver. But black is a color for something very simple and bold, something that you don't have to look at for very long to understand. I thing this looks better on bright colors. But you gave me a great option and that is gray. Gray will make a good t-shirt for the design I'm making.
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:iconshazic7:
shazic7 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2010
I really like this one! :D
I hope you keep it :D
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2010
yeahh that is the final one my bro. :)
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:iconwzrdofozfan:
wzrdofozfan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
It's kind of hard to read the white writing against the grey.
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
It says what does it take for a button to get pushed around here. And that is just the size in T-shirt it would read fine I think.
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:icontrublood-addict:
trublood-addict Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
what does it say in white? looks good, thou. i miss the last edit to be honest
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
Is the same quote, it's too far to see so Ill see if I can make a bigger preview.
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:icontrublood-addict:
trublood-addict Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010
oh ok, its alright :D
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:iconitachihatake1:
ItachiHatake1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010   Filmographer
this is really cool. its hard to make out the text though. maybe you could make it a darker shade of gray that way there is enough contrast to read the words but the red button is still the first thing we see. also the text is really close to armpitt area. the letter T in Take is pretty much not there so that another reason why its hard to make out the text. Great work and idea :)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Yeah I noticed but that is a minor tweak i have to do but basically is all here. The contrast thing well could be a good idea but you got to keep in mind you are seeing this in small dimensions in t-shirt dimensions it would be a whole lot bigger and easer to read . Thanks for the comment :D
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:iconshazic7:
shazic7 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
I like the new design but the text should stand out more, possibly red like the button.
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
hum you got something there but is didn't like the design with too much red. Because I don't want people too look at the whole design at once. I want people to look at the button as the center of attention and maybe ask themselves wtf? or something then read and say ohh I get it.
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:iconshazic7:
shazic7 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
You could always try some kind of comic book style writing.
Like a deep yellow with a darker stroke border (or no border at all).
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Yeah that was the style I went for :D but red to match the button
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:iconidina-0:
Idina-0 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Professional General Artist
I've had a quick look through the rest of your work and I think it's all very impressive. You have a gift for professionalism and a slick, finished quality of work.
I think this t-shirt design is strong as well as fun and the type is definately suitable considering the rest of the t-shirt.
His eyebrows are amazing by the way!
All in all, a great t-shirt design.
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Thanks I appreciate this a lot also thanks for taking a look at my :gallery: :D
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:iconidina-0:
Idina-0 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Professional General Artist
No problem. Let others know if they need feedback then I am more than happy to help! :)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
No problem Ill refer them to you :)
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:icontamster224:
Tamster224 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eh hey~ I like it!
It's cute in a, "I've got attitude way!"
I wish you good luck in the contest!
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
He-he yeah if the button don't get pushed it get mad :fork: he-he.
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:icontamster224:
Tamster224 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ha ha~ I see.
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
:lol:
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:iconwhitechariot:
whitechariot Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kickass entry, I wish you best of luck in the competition.

The idea is nicely executed and the message absolutely conveyed. The typography below the eyed button could use some work. It looks very plain. There are many ways to use typography and make it really appealing. It would be a good idea to look at text art here in dA and take ideas from other pieces. It will help you to make the text also a very important part of the deviation.

Also, regarding the button, it would be nice its colour was not the very same colour the tee has, but maybe a bit brigher or darker. Just not to make it feel so plain.

Hope that helped.


Keep up the good work ;)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Yeah thanks I'm working on the change of the text and I'm changing the color of the tee to white and some other changes. :D ill note you when I'm done so you can look at it ;).
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:iconwhitechariot:
whitechariot Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful =) Keep me up to date ;)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
Yeah :) basically what's there it's it, I already did the edit I wanted and what remains are minor tweaks. But i think I got it.
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:iconwhitechariot:
whitechariot Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like what you did. The text is much more appealing, the composition is good and the button stands out a lot, which is good.

It's really suprising you improved it so much with so little time and so little advice. To my eyes, it looks great now.

You have great talent my friend =)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
Thanks but Ive just been shaping things every chance I get. I'm currently taking a design class so that helps. My professor says that designing is just putting things in an taking thinks out until you get something that satisfies you and your audience as well. Also I took all feedback in consideration some more than others but I tried everything. :)But glad to see it improved.
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:iconwhitechariot:
whitechariot Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ Yus. Keep up the good work!!
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:iconnaoki-reisen:
Naoki-Reisen Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Nice quote on the shirt! If I have enough money, I'll buy this shirt for sure!

The quote is really something you'll be definitely reading. Though maybe if you filled some colors on the bold texts (WHAT and BUTTON). And maybe more emphasis on WHAT. I don't know how much more should you emphasize that, though.

But it's nice already, especially for a T-shirt. In numbers, I'll give this one an 8/10!
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Thanks I think is button or what but I got to emphasize one of those. But not the two of them because I don't want to much focus on other sides that isn't the button itself.
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:iconnaoki-reisen:
Naoki-Reisen Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Hmm..
Anyways, I'll still try to buy it if it wins!
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Thanks I did some changes but I'm satisfied with the results. :D
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:iconnaoki-reisen:
Naoki-Reisen Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
:D
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:iconxadrea:
Xadrea Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
pretty neat i'd say, but i think it would be easier to relate to the audience if you stuck to your original design (or maybe correlating text =))
ps--dont worry, you'll get noticed by the rest of the community, just stay involved, offer comments and join projects ;)
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Hum I get what you are saying but I'm trying to better my design as I go along so It can also make a t-shirt worth buying.
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:iconxadrea:
Xadrea Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
okay =D
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:iconthe-arkz:
the-arkz Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
you already delivered the message perfectly, and I love the message ;)

it just, imo, you need to work more in composition. Maybe the button is too large, and I think the text is better if placed upside not downside
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:iconefgraphicdesing:
EfGraphicDesing Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
Yeah i gotta work on that but I'm getting there but the idea is what is important. Thanks for the comment really helped :D
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:iconlivvyjane:
livvyjane Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010   Photographer
Haha, great idea. True at times... Other times not. The way to get noticed here is to produce stellar art that is worth noticing, in my opinion.
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